As I mentioned in a previous post, for the second to last scene where Mr.Bleaney is looking out of his window, I felt this composition on the left was successful but I didn't like the medium or the colours in which I did it. I have re drawn the image and now I feel this will represent scene five better in the series of final images. I am still unsure on medium and size but I have tested a sketch on A5 lino and think that is the direction I want to head in.
I agree with you I think this is a much stronger composition. Perhaps look at the scale and design of your bed as it looks a bit small compared with the other objects in the room.
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