After cutting this scene, I thought that although I like the detail of the composition the woman's face is too distracting. I tried taking her out of the composition but eventually just drew her face again on photoshop which I'm more happy with. Overall I think the print gives the atmosphere I wanted, I think it is obvious that the woman isn't his wife and that she owns the property in some way, and I think I have made the room bare enough for people to understand that it isn't luxurious but added enough detail so that the scene isn't boring.
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