Poor Cow Collage Response

Response to Poor Cow Collage. 
Inspired by Edward Bawden dust jacket. 
I thought instead of drawing this one I would paint the figures to get a thicker line which I like 
but like my other collage I think Joy and Tom are too small within the forefront. 
I wanted to use the scene of the photographers when Joy and Beryl are modelling 
because it is such an uncomfortable scene and so is when Tom hits Joy. I wanted both of them together to explore this side of the narrative. Overall I would use the thick lines again but perhaps on a bigger scale and with one colour not two. 

Top right Edward Bawden Dust Jacket

Poor Cow collage