Poor Cow working from collages

Drawing from the collage. I thought by adding the scene where Beryl and Joy 
are looking in the mirror before they start modelling and changing the reflection to the 
scene where Joy is being abused by her husband Tom would add more depth and interest
to the scene rather than it keeping the normal narrative. 
I think the use of perspective within Poor Cow is interesting and I think this
composition reflects that. 
 The two figures at the side would have to be bigger for it to be 
more successful and although I like the textures and patterns I've used 
for this composition it looks slightly too busy and I would be better furthering this as a print.

 

Collage I used to draw from 

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