Developed new compositions Cathy Come Home and Poor Cow

Developed from the compositions previous inspired by Barnett Freedman who I found 
in the Illustrated Dust Jacket book he was a British painter and commercial designer who worked within the 30s and 40s. 
Although I like both of these and think they look a lot more refined than my other ink drawings, as John said the figure on the bottom left isn't visible enough the red ink has made her disappear but I think in a different colour this could be successful.