Joy on the Highstreet Print

High street print - After I enjoyed doing the Woolworths print I tried to do another outside but it didn't go as well. I have some new ink so I think it does look good in black but I don't think I got the composition right on it. 
The people at the forefront are Joy, Dave and Jonny from Poor Cow, I thought it would be good as I am adding myself to scenes to include them as well, I like this idea and will use it again in my next print but I don't think my reflection worked well in this and that's what lets it down. 
I also think I could of thought more about where the light comes, I thought I had but it just hasn't printed as well.